Personally I really like my room. Earrings, jewelry, crafts and a whole bunch of other stuff piled on top of the dresser. My Home is my Castle. Firstly the layout, my bedroom is the largest bedroom in the house and this means I have to share it with my younger sister. The accessories in my room are mainly either the same as or matching the colour scheme in my room. On the board there is flowers carved on them. Well my room is very messy I hate tidying my room I alway have clothes all over the floor. But then there's homework but you can still do it in your room on your bed or desk. My next topic is my rooms cleanliness. my clothes. Troy you have used some good vocab. My bed is painted a purple-indigo colour. This seems to be a fair reflection of your bedroom. Your spelling needs some tweaking but overall I think you've done really well :). Nice job Andrew really liked reading your piece of writing it deserves well. When you walk in my room you will see a white door and when you walk in the main area all the walls are white with dark furniture. Also I have bad eyesight so It Is really hard to see my tv from my bed. My bedroom is in the south end of the hose and it faces southwest. The layout of my room is great and I really like it. I think Bridget's description of her room is fairly accurate. He is a pig. Then there's the senses - smell, sight, sound, touch. I hate tidying my room but this is something that needs to be done more often. I have this there because well I play games alot. There isn't really a theme to it. Describes it well. It has quite a bit of mess on top of the cabinet and next to the cabinet is white and black draws which holds my books and other things and above the drawers is a colorful kite. There is a massive window in front of you as you walk into my bedroom. Its small and cluttered, so there's no where to move. Over all I thought it was great with little mistakes. Luckily for me I dont have much to tidy, unlike my brother. On the left behind the wall, you can see a lot of lego and a few book and also a bean bag. Can't see any spelling errors good job . The furniture in my room fits nicely with my double bed in the corner by my door, my bedside table beside that, my desk in the corner beside the windows and my chair beside my wardrobe. My bed is nearly always made. All Rights Reserved. Your punctuation was good. Teatukuras bedroom The carpet packs a warm feel to the room as it completes it and gives it a nice finish. I like how you used brackets and capital letters to make words stand out, Your Spelling is good Molly. Its got a squishy top. Moving on from the layout of my bedroom to the layout of my walls. The odours of the room could be smelt from the kitchen. I have a single bed which it is made from wood as its frame, it has a black with grey duvet, and if you look above it, theres an adorable tiger painting. Bed, Desk Drawers and bean bag are most of the furniture in the room, the double bed's too big for the room the there is the desk the desk is big wooden and has my docking station and all of my accessories on it, then there is the beanbag the bean bag is lodged in between he bed and the desk it doesn't get used much i only really put my school bag on it but i still think that it's a cool thing to have in the room. I don't care what people think about it because its my own space. This means I get most of the afternoon sun. My room has an area where I keep drawing and pictures, an area for me to keep my collections. The dark side. A strange smell like no other. I dont like vacuuming so I try to get out of it as much as I can. You might use this metaphor if your brother and sister just argued all day long. So I have my bed on the left wall and on the other side of my bedroom is my tv cabinet. Not too big that it's not cozy, and not too small it's cramped. If you walk into my room your senses would explode because of the smell, sight, sound, touch. With the midnight black dumbells and tackle bag, race red resistance bands and all my large cricket and rugby bags. For me and my sisters to fit in our room the room has to be laid out a specific way, but it is pretty comfy. Secondly the lighting, at four oclock my room is almost pitch black and its so damp and cold. But i think I saw some spelling mistakes. My bed sits in the very middle of the room, while my large dresser, containing all of my clothes, is tucked in beside it. You've likely heard many primary metaphors throughout the course of your life and studies. This is to say that one person (your mother, father, wife, husband) is the person who makes you feel most comfortable and relaxed. It holds over 40 books as well as countless keepsakes, wires and old toys. Relevance. Reading and studying books across the studying bench and on the side table. To the right in the hallway on the creaking floor is my bedroom. Its a blue 3 person couch with blue, red, and green lines all [around the couch and it unfolds into a king size bed when unfolded. WILL HS BEDROOM My room smells inviting, it's like strawberries mixed with flowers (which smells good). Your punctuation is also correct, and I didn't see any wrong. This is the place I go to when I have to go to bed or to just chill. Feed-forward - You had nouns but boring adjectives 'A computer that is big and fun' add more description to it 'Speakers that are loud' it's too boring be more interesting. I usually put the feathered ones at the bottom and the cotton ones on the top. My accessories are very colourful, my pens and pencils are all kinds of colours. Around the neck itself I keep my karate belts, white, orange, yellow and purple. I have loads of different accessories in my bedroom. Notepads and pens are strewn everywhere, useless papers accompanying them. your bedroom is like the inside of your head (simile). Overall I love my room just the way it is. The walls of my room are brown and the door is white the a gray handle. There are special items in my bedroom that cost a lot of money and one of those accessories are my Hats . I have a black carpet with a white lines diagonally going through it. People who work from home might have a big computer setup with large monitors, webcams, and microphones. My duvet has many colours and matches everything in my room, including my bright pink beanbag. I have heaps of pictures in my room, on my wall I have a picture of a duck (which I took) and in my wardrobe there are pictures of my dog, family and friends. If were tired, then R.I.P floor, your burial is in progress. You may find me laying there reading a book in the natural light coming through my window, which is my main source of light. 2. as far apart as the poles. I like the vocabulary you used to describe your story like vibrant, large, silk, chilled. Georges Bedroom Like maybe a gigantic , SHE HULK!, or maybe not but I love my room with all those fancy accessories. On the opposite wall to that I have a standard size mat, a white mirror with one small painting beside it, the painting is of a small girl with a soft red dress on dancing. MY BEDROOM You might walk through all the different scenes of people playing and say, wow, my home has become a playground today!. eg Self fun. Now, the layout. Probably you will see my bed first it's right under my window right in the center in my room. When I walk into my bedroom I always love that feeling when it is so so warm that you just lay there and forget about everything. The bed is the main part of any bedroom because that's where everyone spends the most time. metaphors to describe a bedroom the root operation that is defined as correcting a portion of My room to me is the most warmest place in house which makes my room cozy and casual. I also have two Japanese swords in my room and one of them are a full size katana and makes my room feel like i'm safe if anyone tries to break in. Describe The Room Your In Describe the room you are in Dark, empty and cool; I gaze ahead at the room before me, with only the sound of the air conditioner thrumming. It use to be an old garage but was renovated into a bedroom that Im proud to call it mine. There's flower patterns everywhere and unique designs on my furniture. Under my bed I throw just about everything down there like sport gear and clothes I can't be bothered putting away. My room is very minimalistic because of the black and white design. I move things around to make it look tidy. It used to be a spare room and I moved into it a couple of years ago. MY BEDROOM It is a king single with 2 gold pillows and a gold king double size blanket, with the window next to it, so my bed and my pillows get soaked and thats always a laugh in my house for some reason. My bed is NEVER made properly, (unless mum makes it for me.) My favorite thing in my bedroom is my drums they are blue and black but look purple in the light. Although this also gets used by my sister who also to the right of that is a small toy box filled to the brim and next to it there is a big wardrobe that I never use. Writers usually describe the setting at the very start of a story. There are books all over the place. I have some great accessories in my room that can give you a story about my personality. I spend probably 12 hours a day on my bed so it needs to be nice and comfy luckily it is. Thirdly, the colour scheme. My bedroom is exactly the way I like it, there is a chair in the corner which is very comfortable. (The shark's teeth are sharp.) All I can hear is my brothers music playing really loud and the sound of my dad telling me to clean my room. The room has a big space to go around in and has the hobbies I like.but best of all is to spend time with yourself and always relax after a long day. size: the room was as small as a box. My pillow has different coloured stripes on it and it is very soft and comfy. From an outside point of view, it seems to be arranged in an orderly fashion. It smells like fresh vanilla because of the bowl of dried petals and shells that have been smothered with air freshener. The polaroid camera doesn't have anywhere else to go so it just sits on my desk. I like it this way because it's bright and colourful. My room does not have a lot of furniture in it but the favorite part of my room does and that is my desk it has two skinny shelves next to it. It gives a very accurate picture of Sophie's room. If you listen closely you can hear the constant purring of my kitten who is almost always a curled up fluff ball on my bed, you can also hear the random gurgling of the radiator and maybe the odd dragging of the paws on my midget staffy snuffling about for food. Hey Chris good job I never knew about that Hulk thing though or seen it. Not always that bad because your mother gets sick of it and cleans it up a bit!!!!!!!!! Reubens bedroom description A cool breeze drifts in from an open door or window. Even though my room hasnt got much in it, my room is the tidiest bedroom there. Then to the right of my wardrobe is my tv cabinet which is a light brown wooden cabinet and it holds the usual tv, PS4 and XBOX 360 LOGANS BEDROOM 4. The adjectives summarise the tranquil space really well. Its the biggest bedroom in the house and that's why I like it. Jessie, I liked the length of the paragraphs and the descriptive words that you put in. But thankfully, I dont have to suffer these flaws much longer, because in the holidays, Ill be moving rooms and Ill have the smallest but sunniest room in the house. This is such a clear description of your room Mabelle! Now lets talk about the mess. Senses are all over the show when it comes to my room. In my room I also have a painting the my Aunty drew for me, It is a huge field of wheat with huts in them but no people from what you can see. My bed, My bed is a single bed it is in my opinion very noisy but also very comfy. The layout of the room has a facing direction pointing at the north east with side on single beds one near the huge closets and one across near the sliding windows for the sun to enter. Your punctuation is really good, but you are missing a few commas and had some capital letters missing. Nicely described George, your room is currently a blank canvas so you can do a lot with it. All my clothes and shoes are hidden away in the wardrobe so you dont have to see them. The only messy things in my room is my carpet. Warmth of a Smile (Simile) Jack likes listening to different stories of his Grandma, and when he speaks with her, Jack notices that lines around her mouth are like sun rays. This comparison illuminates the fact that his Grandma is a good-natured and kind person whose kindness warms like sun rays. The only errors I could see was that you wrote picture instead of pictures. The soft and wooly ground. The punctuation is almost flawless, as far as I can see. I believe this because my bright orange feature wall attracts the daylight sun and all of the furniture is either new or has had a splash of paint to make it look fresh. Maybe next time don't use 'my' too much. Which is what I did that day. Its a room I am proud to call my own. I like the feel, the carpet, my bed and the size of it. "one of them is a full size katana", Great story, the vocabulary was good and very descriptive. why are clocks (The ones u hang on the wall) still important in the digital age? it has a good layout and the furniture is nice. I like the part when you recognise that your room needs cleaning and organise your things to feel much comfortable but most of all you are comfortable in your room. On the very top of my tall draws of my dressers are a couple of drink bottles, along with a cup I got from netball this season. I really liked your description about your bedroom. When you look around my room you can see a whole bunch of different things, if you climb above all the dirty clothes, theres all of my furniture, my radiator and a whole load of colours. You might say this if you felt like you learned a lot during your summer break from school. If you walk into my room and look to the left you will see my bed and bedside cabinet, look to the far left corner and you will see my drums, then look to the far right corner is my dresser with all my old toys on top, and some lego technic then beside that is my desk/bookshelf and if you glance at the floor you will see the mess. I love my bedroom and I wish you guys could see it person so you can see how and why I love my bedroom. The layout of my bedroom is the thing I most like about my room. Now another thing about my room is that it is never clean well unless mum cleans it but there's always something on the ground like a lunch box or cloths mostly cloths. what is commonly misdiagnosed as pink eye. A time where I can focus on myself and feel peace. E.g pain main, Logan you had lots of spelling mistakes like you said flour instead of floor and 'i's not 'I' \. Overall well done. The best metaphors come from the heart. Curtains and carpet are the same grey colour, but the carpet is so soft you could sleep on it. I have to share my room with my big brother, Sam. The size of my bedroom is actually the right size. My bedroom is special to me because it's where I can go to get alone time and just relax it's pretty smelly but it's a cozy warm layout that is just for me. It also has jumps for my motorbike but you cant really see them because they are covered over with grass since I dont go on them much anymore. In the summer it reaches a boiling point the duvets on the bed gets thinner and thinner and it gets harder to catch some sleep. I am going to take you on a virtual expedition through my bedroom. But there are a few errors like no enters between your intro and first point. My pillow is softer than a cloud and feels like a giant marshmallow. My curtains are also blue. There is also a bit a sporty feel because of all the sports gear. I can also take out anger when I am annoyed and I needed my drums to practice for my drum lessons. In my room the cleanliness is not so good. My curtains are dark blue so if a have a sleep in the day it seems like it's night. Use adjectives. Due to the architectural design of my house, my rooms windows receive little to no sun, excluding the few hours of late afternoon to sundown. My walls are a light gray with light gray carpet but also my sheets on my bed are gray as well. You have described your room well and I can paint a picture. You also need to double check that your sentences making sense. I like how you used a lot of description! My room was and old garage and now it is a room that has an olden day look, but still feels like a modern room. My room is a square room and is medium sized, I am lucky enough that I have it all to myself. The carpet a deep chocolate brown to complement a pure white set of draws. Colors are a big part in my bedroom because the colors describe who I am and what my personality is like because I am a person who prefers darker colors. The darker colors in my room are mainly my wardrobe doors and my duvet, my duvet is black, grey and a dark orange. My bedroom supplies a marvellous view. The other decoration in bedroom is my average size mirror which has lots of writing on it so I can remember what I need to do. I dont know if food plates count as accessories because if they do i have a lot of accessories. But there are disadvantages to having a small room. I think that it is still also good to keep using basic words. Also when you look down ot my window you can see the workshop and the shed. I noticed that most of your words you could spell right. like how you have used brackets. On my bed I have, to be precise three cushions and two pillows that are all multi coloured. Next time just maybe double check spelling. Flagstone Cost Per Pallet, great work i love that you did good punctuation and it was a good story. Because its too big to get out the door and it sits almost in front of my door and we cant get it out and I hate it. must suck cock. This is the first year ive had my own room, and I love having it. I suck creamy cock. now I will tell you about the hard wood of my dutchess, my duchess is dark wood it has lots of junk on top of it such as my watch some books a photo that's framed and a lot more. Awesome description of your room Alex. Things that you need to work on is the punctuation and the length of your sentences. Because if you dont and try wade through all the clothes spread out and risk breaking your leg or ankle on toy cars or getting bits of lego stuck between your toes. For the decorations there is a row of vintage paper dresses hanging above my bed, a picture of Paris- (somewhere I would like to go), A big round mirror, just high enough for me to use, and an inspirational sayings that inspire me each day. My bed isnt the brightest as its grey, black and white. The house is an old homestead and the wood has a great chestnut kind of color. Although there are many flaws in my room, Im still tolerating them. Feels very hot. You could work on the adjectives but otherwise very good. My carpet is dark brown and I have no rugs or anything other than my carpet on the floor. Dont sniff to much or else you will smell the dirty clothes on the floor. Overall I think my bedroom is nice and comfy, and I like it the way it is. This is placed flush against the left hand wall and is filled with many treasures. My bedroom isnt so great. The smell isn't actually to bad because I can open some huge, one meter high windows and blow out the stinky odours. The pencils are mostly sharp, pointy ready to be used. I like this description of your bed room. Bunkhouse Western Fabric, 3. I would give you a rubric 5. My bed is quite low to the ground. My hands are ice. Metaphors are used by many people to help convey a more abstract concept. You have used good related descriptive words. Hannahs Bedroom Your next step is to use a wider range of vocabulary to more easily describe your room. Below the small window on the left is a nice, lush white desk with a lot of my belongings lying on top. Brooke, I like the way you used your vocabulary skills. Sheep are dotted around a field of copious green, munching greedily away. The furniture is really comfy and I really like it. Creamy brown and soft those are just few words I would use to describe my carpet it is great for my hard feet. Above my bed there are another three picture that my mum had embroidered for us when we were little. Next to that is a deceptive worktop.
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